Me

Fathima
Naughty,nice,sweet and silly
Sister of Naaema and Ameen
Lover of chocolates,nature and Afzal
Who feels pain,heartache and intense love
Who fears the Almighty, thunder and death
Who would like to see Kilimanjaro, the sahara and the pyramids
Resident of Vryheid,Kwazulu natal, South frica
Dawood
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 5, 2012 at 1:03 AM
Love it Fathima!!
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December 2, 2008 at 4:20 PM
Love this glimpse of you. I share your love of nature. I like how you used your name for the first and last lines with the thoughts about yourself in between. Such a creative idea. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Blessings to you. Karen
Ahmad Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 3:49 AM
Everything about you? great piece!
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October 15, 2008 at 8:40 PM
This is quite and introduction of oneself. This is also quite an inspirational touch of beauty across the spectrum. I like the flow of the words and the message of elegance expressed in this piece. One must wonder if such beauty is real, mythical or mystical. Great job oh beauty of loveliness! ~Joseph
White Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 5:53 PM
I like this write, it speaks of the real you and what makes you who you are, take care D-ncye
Winter Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 2:19 PM
YOU are beautiful! And your poetry rocks! Sorry I will be missing some here, busy, busy lately. Love, Shar
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October 14, 2008 at 4:05 AM
I love this work a lot and how you let us in a small bit to see who you are. I love the naught , nice, sweet and silly line, and also the things that you would like to see. Great work
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October 14, 2008 at 3:35 AM
Good to know a bit more about you, a very sweet and well done poem. love Kristin
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October 14, 2008 at 2:54 AM
A good slf-expression Fathima.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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