Me

Fathima Naughty,nice,sweet and silly Sister of Naaema and Ameen Lover of chocolates,nature and Afzal Who feels pain,heartache and intense love Who fears the Almighty, thunder and death Who would like to see Kilimanjaro, the sahara and the pyramids Resident of Vryheid,Kwazulu natal, South frica Dawood

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Daisy Duck

Date: 9/5/2012 1:03:00 AM

Love it Fathima!!

Date: 12/2/2008 4:20:00 PM

Love this glimpse of you. I share your love of nature. I like how you used your name for the first and last lines with the thoughts about yourself in between. Such a creative idea. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Blessings to you. Karen

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 11/4/2008 3:49:00 AM

Everything about you? great piece!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/15/2008 8:40:00 PM

This is quite and introduction of oneself. This is also quite an inspirational touch of beauty across the spectrum. I like the flow of the words and the message of elegance expressed in this piece. One must wonder if such beauty is real, mythical or mystical. Great job oh beauty of loveliness! ~Joseph

Deneen White

Date: 10/14/2008 5:53:00 PM

I like this write, it speaks of the real you and what makes you who you are, take care D-ncye

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/14/2008 2:19:00 PM

YOU are beautiful! And your poetry rocks! Sorry I will be missing some here, busy, busy lately. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/14/2008 4:05:00 AM

I love this work a lot and how you let us in a small bit to see who you are. I love the naught , nice, sweet and silly line, and also the things that you would like to see. Great work

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/14/2008 3:35:00 AM

Good to know a bit more about you, a very sweet and well done poem. love Kristin

Brian Strand

Date: 10/14/2008 2:54:00 AM

A good slf-expression Fathima.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments