Mcdonald's Date

Your 
Dad should 
Come with us 
The food is not 
Coming until the freedom shines in him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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December 22, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Yeah dads should accompany dates . That way young girls couldn't be used and abused then trashed like I see so many . An interesting poem. Thumbs up. Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
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