Maze

PATHS were bordered by boxwood hedges softened with fern, surrounding GARDEN edges. Light floral scents perfumed the morning air and sweet alyssum lined walkways; pea graveled. I strolled through the MAZE with a hint of despair for I'd never been more confused and unraveled, or in greater fear for my own welfare than I did standing beside the boundary WALL that towered to heights, confoundingly tall. Endless TWISTING trails were quite unexpected. I cringed with timid thoughts of becoming LOST. Forlorn from many dead end routes I'd selected and annoyed from each fork I'd already crossed, escape seemed to be hopeless and I felt rejected... like a wave crashing on a sea that's storm tossed. Now, with sunlight TURNING its warm face away, I dropped to my knees and fervently began to pray. I was TRAPPED inside a PUZZLE, with no way out, winding among SINUOUS beds that roses adorned. My mind became clouded and plagued with doubt. Then I heard a whisper, while my heart mourned, "Do not lose faith, Daughter. You must remain devout. Find the courage to try once again," it mildly scorned. I stood as twilight started painting the Eastern sky and plucked a white rose bud as my undaunted reply. MAZE-10 Word Challenge Sponsored by A Dear Heart Posted on June 28, 2020
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Gondolf Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:36 PM
May you never be trapped within the puzzle of life my friend. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 4:18 AM
You are always very kind with your comments, John. Thanks so much!
La France Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my maze contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
Logan Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 4:17 PM
I'm pleased by the honor of having placed in your contest, Constance. Your pen name is very tender.
Mishra Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 2:25 PM
A beautiful write with some exceptional metaphors for life through nature and emotions. Love how it ends on a hopeful note Jenna. Congratulations on your splendid win. Blessings and love :)
Logan Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 4:15 PM
Thank you very much for the kindness of your comments, Aditi.
Somadas Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 12:38 AM
I stood as twilight started painting the Eastern sky.. and plucked a white rose bud as my undaunted reply.. Beautiful lines Jenna..Great win.. Congrats..
Logan Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Thank you very much, Jenish.
Callus Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 7:05 AM
This is such a beautiful metaphor, Jenna! Sometimes we can find ourselves trapped in life's 'maze', but we have to believe, trust, and never give up! ~ Warm regards // paul
Logan Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:56 AM
Hello, Paul. Thanks so much for your inciteful comments. We DO have to believe in the power of faith.
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 6:54 AM
Love the imagery Jenna, great use of the ten words. Good luck in the contest Tom
Logan Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:55 AM
Hi Tom, and thank you for the bright cheer!
Brul Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 8:46 PM
A sublime write that conveys faith, hope and love. Great maze dear Jenna!
Logan Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Thank you very much for such nice thoughts.
Inman Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 8:34 PM
A lovely write Jenna, good luck.
Logan Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 9:09 PM
Thank you so much, James.
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