Maze

I feel like I'm falling……. And there's no landing in view I can't breathe……. But there is no air left in my lungs I crave love and want to be loved But my heart gave out many moons ago I am thirsty………. But there is no water in sight I feel like I'm going around in circles with no way out. Wait! I think I see a way out. No it's just another turn. I'm stuck and I can't get out. Is this a maze? Dam it is a maze. I'm caught up in a never ending circle called life. My life is a maze. Can you relate? Have you ever felt like your life is merely a maze? 8-10-19 Alexis Y.

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/8/2019 12:37:00 PM

So Right You are. well-Penned.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/12/2019 1:36:00 PM

Hello Alexis Y.Yes i do at times feel like i am going in a maze,not being able to get out makes me scream! I do hope you find your way out soon. Have a nice day my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2019 3:40:00 PM

Round and round I go, in a maze, my brain in a haze. I know the feeling well, Alexis. ~ gw

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/11/2019 9:01:00 AM

Does that make your life A-Maze-ing? Yes at times life does take challenging turns.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/10/2019 2:02:00 PM

Hi Alexis, whether a maze, a merry go round or the swings, live is a sometimes up sometimes down journey , an absolute maze - yes I get it, we are in life's maze, I agree with you, I see it clearly. So well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/10/2019 11:30:00 AM

My life is more like a merry-go-round, it just seems to spin faster and faster. Nicely penned, Alexis, All the best my friend. Hugs, John

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/10/2019 11:18:00 AM

I can absolutely relate to this Alexis. Well done! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/10/2019 10:07:00 AM

WOW! Life is a maze from time to time..most can relate to your splendid verse..so well depicted Alexis.