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May's Shy Kiss

Blades whisper as I walk the grass Impatiens blush Wisteria hides behind lavender dreadlocks As dawn peeks above roof tops a timid breeze touches my cheek and May's shy kiss brushes my silent lips 1st Place June Standard Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand Submitted 5/30/17

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Date: 9/21/2017 8:00:00 PM
very touching - beautifully crafted.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/21/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line.
Date: 5/31/2017 8:11:00 PM
Dale, a hearty congratulations on your lovely poem, 'May's Shy Kiss.' ~ Sonia
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/1/2017 9:45:00 AM
thanks, Sonia!
Date: 5/29/2017 12:58:00 AM
wowowow, this is BEST I have seen tonight. Truly beautiful in its imagery. FAVE
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/29/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 5/28/2017 8:38:00 PM
Where can I find those 'lavender dreadlocks"..Great write..
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/29/2017 8:21:00 AM
I have some in my yard at this moment. go to where the wisteria is blooming. Thanks!
Date: 5/28/2017 10:57:00 AM
wow what wonderful personification Dale - May can come and kiss me all she wants I won't complain!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/28/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I changed the form classification. I'm glad when I can learn new things. you've helped me a lot.
Date: 5/28/2017 10:25:00 AM
Very lovely image Dale
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/28/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thanks, Tim.

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