Mayday In April

 haiku 

squirrel in my garden
roots for his acorns
mayday in April
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 4:25 PM
love the imagery a 7 congratulations on your win
Haight Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on your win, Reason! Nicely done. Hugs, Sandra
Poteet Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 8:09 PM
thanks, Sandra, appreciate the read and remarks.
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 9:50 PM
An interesting observation for may in April!! Congrats on your win.
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March 14, 2015 at 8:08 PM
thanks, Andrea, as I mentioned to Debbie, the squirrel's "mayday" distress call at the loss of his acorns was outdone only by mine at the uprooting of my new garden seedlings. Appreciate the congrats.
Guzzi Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 7:51 PM
You are on the right path grasshopper! [in the garden/a squirrel roots for acorns: a May day in April] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Poteet Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 9:06 PM
poor squirrel was as distressed as I, his stash gone along with many of my seedlings uprooted. Thanks for you kind comment.
Allison Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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March 12, 2015 at 1:45 PM
thanks, Jan, glad you did.
Nance Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 11:01 AM
This was cute, grats on your win!
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March 12, 2015 at 1:46 PM
thanks, Casarah. glad you liked it and left a comment.
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Lovely imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx
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March 11, 2015 at 9:44 PM
thank you, Jan. I'll have to check out some of your haiku.
Pinet Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 10:31 AM
The imagery is good and the reader can feel the experience. Emile. #7
Poteet Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 8:14 PM
thank you Emile, glad for the comment and the interaction, thanks for the 7.
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