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Mayday Comes From French

M'aider … Mayday, comes from French, that word, with fright, I radio, my engine dead, this nighttime glide, vast sky and ocean black as ink, waves rising, lapping, leaping up until the splash, wings ditching in, a frantic swim, inflating raft, my sea-soaked struggle to climb in then drift and bob through endless dark, despair and chill a numbing pair while drooping, dozing, nodding off … then through his succor of weak sleep, the sea's east edge grew limned with white and stars lost vigor in dull sky, its gray, faint light caressing him; he gasped and jolted, jumped awake, aware hope rises with pale glow, that pastel-pink renews all life and rescue, soon, will be at hand!

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Date: 5/29/2025 11:09:00 PM
Love this; both for its poetic content and educational slant. I'm forever intrigued by the origins of words and it just makes so much sense that Mayday comes from the French "help me" Many English words do. I love how dandelion comes from the French dents de lion (teeth of the lion). Great read. Cheers - Gary
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