Maybe White Doves

You looked before you stepped
I just touched the floor
Their feathers felt your ears
But did the mind explore?

I stood in for gravity
When your feelings were exposed
Fragments torn from fragments
I am amazed you flew so far.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 27, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Tony, am visiting again! this poem holds up to time real well! in my book ...that's a great poem!! filled with your very creative mind!! UNIQUE TO YOU!!! Jim
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March 17, 2009 at 1:48 PM
great stuff Tony! Jim
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