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Maybe This Time

Keep whispering those pretty lines in my ear maybe this time they'll be true. Keep reading me the same script, and maybe this time I'll get my happy ending. Keep pretending that you only want to make me happy keep telling me how much you love me, and maybe this time I'll ignore the ache.

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/18/2014 8:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, ana

Heather Browne

Date: 3/18/2014 12:16:00 AM

Ana, Nice! Well done!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2014 5:04:00 PM

Ana,, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2014 3:32:00 PM

Ana, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2014 3:08:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Ana :) - I choose your first nice written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/4/2014 3:25:00 PM

Ana, emotional and deep. , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT