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Why openly express, share or write fleeting feelings that can change like seasons? Why invest in a future of just critical review? Just be still and quiet you tell your heart, your mind and your pen. And it is that way for a while until. There is something missing, and it starts. Is it a acknowledgement that is needed? Is it a subconscious ego that has to be fed;? Or maybe just a passed on lovely gift that is just enhanced by the warm sunshine. It could be the fight to share something. positive of a creative sort? Then again a plain battle inside to keep love, beauty, and hope alive no matter the physical, emotional and mental challenges of everyday life? Each person has a story, song or dance written or unwritten. Their work can be judged but not the heart motive. Because everyone's steps they have to walk is complicated and not easy. Maybe some of these are the reasons.

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