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Why openly express,  share or write fleeting 
              feelings that can change like seasons? 
Why invest in a future of just critical review? 
Just be still and quiet you tell your heart,  your
                       mind and your pen. 
And it is that way for a while until. 
There is something missing,  and it starts. 
Is it a acknowledgement that is needed? 
Is it a subconscious ego that has to be fed;?
Or maybe just a passed on lovely gift that 
   is just enhanced by the warm sunshine. 
It could be the fight to share something.      
                      positive of a creative sort? 
Then again a plain battle inside to keep
     love,  beauty,  and hope alive no matter
     the physical,  emotional and mental
     challenges of everyday life? 
Each person has a story, song or dance
written or unwritten.  
Their work can be judged but not the heart motive. 
Because everyone's steps they have to walk is
complicated and not easy. 
Maybe some  of these are the reasons.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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