Maybe Next Time

I hear the refrigerator door closing at midnight The sound of another failed diet
For the Grook contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ryerson Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 9:54 PM
You are some kind of funny lady Barbara!...Not many poems make me laugh out loud put this one sure did...Congratulations - Tim
Jones Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations Barbara..Donna
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April 11, 2013 at 10:51 AM
Barbara, Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 2:26 PM
Congrats on your winning Grook..Sara
Richards Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 7:50 PM
Oh yes..........!!! Did I write this? lol !
Jones Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 7:08 PM
I relate
Mantle Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 12:51 PM
So true! Nice and succinct! Best wishes in the contest. Em
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