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Maybe Just Maybe

Maybe it's me I just don't like the tempo maybe it how I'm feeling or is it just not that simple the harmony put it in perspective Maybe it's me what's this songs objective try to be have great intent music dropping crowd for concert since they want to sing and party down maybe it's me the music is so different now remember when people could really sing the words meant so much the joy songs did bring maybe it's me I just can't be inspired they drag in the intro's and by the time of the verse it makes me tired I lose interest part or midway the wors don't make sense what did that fellow say why is she so happy about end where did this come from how does it end maybe it's me who are you try'na inspire the background lacks sound the forground doesn't inspire the words are well try'na get me to think a reposition that aint the right thing rangey and groovey a bassy tenor thing the alto's want more representation attention to her then she'll leave a somble sample spur maybe it's me shouldn't we just click our fingers hum and muble when the words jumbles and dissittters likeit like it but let's improve we want people dancing we are not encouraging to move maybe it me or maybe it's you

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