Imran Islam Poet Rhyme

Maybe It's Wrong

Nothing is wrong
when I am young
and you are beautiful
I can't wait too long
to listen to your song
when nature is wonderful.

No, maybe it's wrong
when we're unknown
and not committed
I wouldn't sing for you
Now I need to know you
and we should be committed.

Okay then alright
Give it up tonight,
Nothing has happened yet.
Yeah, you were wrong
let it go and wait a long
for a true sky light.

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Caren Krutsinger July 10, 2020 at 4:15 PM I feel you value the concept of getting to know each other first and not rushing things thus possibly ruining a lifelong possibility of bliss as I read this. Imran Islam July 10, 2020 at 5:18 PM Dear Poet, Thanks a lot for your kinds words. Stay safe , Stay close!

D.W. Rodgers July 9, 2020 at 6:56 AM Nice, eighteen lines capturing the conflicts of desire and duty in young love. Stay safe Imran Islam July 9, 2020 at 9:10 AM Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. God bless

Jennifer Proxenos July 9, 2020 at 5:48 AM A very thought provoked write Lure - may all go well for you. Blessings my friend. Jennifer. Imran Islam July 9, 2020 at 9:14 AM Dear Jennifer, Thank you so much for your inspirational comments. I am young and you all are my inspiration. Stay safe, stay close!

Elaine George July 8, 2020 at 6:14 PM Much to ponder her, dear Lure. Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine Imran Islam July 8, 2020 at 8:10 PM Dear Elaine, Thanks for your comments. Stay safe!

Tom Cunningham July 8, 2020 at 12:22 PM We have to move cautiously, too quick and we might ruin the moment. Always be patient, it pays off in the end. Tom Imran Islam July 8, 2020 at 12:44 PM Dear Tom, thank you so much for your deep and powerful comments. I got it. Stay safe!

Darlene De Beaulieu July 8, 2020 at 11:50 AM Hello Lure Pot, enjoyed the poem. You know it takes time to know each other.Enjoy your day my friend. Blessings Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu July 12, 2020 at 7:49 AM This is a lovely poem Lure, I followed your suggestion and made my breakfast With the bread and honeyand egg. I enjoyed it Thank you. I will have it more often now. Enjoy your day my friend. Imran Islam July 8, 2020 at 11:53 AM Yes, thank you so much for your lovely comments my friend. Stay safe!