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Maybe America Just Maybe

Bright stars complement the darken sky Stratus clouds quivering in the distance about to cry if this worlds made in God’s image I ask myself why is the sky about to cry Maybe we haven’t lived up to Gods expectations Maybe America’s destination hasn’t been reached due to improper navigation Maybe you’d say America’s destination hasn’t been reached because individuals not finding it obligation Maybe she’d say America’s destination hasn’t been reached due to lack of education Or maybe he’d say America’s destination hasn’t been reached due to the greed of congress aka political corporations We use to be a golden nation, God was in school and children had more dedication Inspiration to others but the last 8 years drastically declined due to obvious explanation But maybe 2009 is the perfect year to do away with the old and begin on a solid foundation Maybe once again we can form a true nation, a creation that holds fascination instead of frustration Maybe Maybe we can We can. We can be that Golden Nation with proper preparation, Effort & motivation from the current youth as to say the new generation Proper navigation from a man with a lot of courage & imagination It’s Time. It’s time to stop with all this political pollution and put true ideal into execution A peaceful revolution of solution creating an America of evolution

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/19/2009 3:16:00 PM
Bravo!!~! I only had one minor point of disagreement (duck) But all in all great work, great message! Light & Love debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/16/2009 8:41:00 PM
Wow, James..This was really deep and it delivered an amazing message..this world does need change REALLY bad, and the most important change is everyone needs GOD in their lives. They are things that man just cannot do, But God can do all things, I put my faith in him. We as a nation need to put God before us everyday and see how much things will get better... Nice flow of true emotions shown here, God Bless You and stay strong, Fantastic poem.*Tyesha
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Date: 1/16/2009 8:19:00 PM
i know the timing & flow is off but it happens. i dont feel like back spacing and i was just leting my optimisim kinda pour out what ever thoughts were in my noodle of a brain. love & peace - james
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