Maybe

I smile - I smile every time
But, I smile once she's past
I wonder why she's never smiled back.

We talk - we talk every time
But, we talk when she's past
I wonder why she's never answered back.

Maybe she does smile,
Maybe she does answer back,
But, maybe she only does it when she's past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mays  Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 11:50 PM
I've felt that. Very touching
Bolton Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 3:14 PM
And here I thouht I was the only one that happened to. Enjoyed this convoluted expression of your poem. But yes indeed, I have been bypassed by the most georgous chicks (women for the ones who might be offended by chicks). Never could understand, but I'm beginning to think that maybe they could take just one look at me and understand I was the sort of guy who would call them chicks. Eh . . . Sory for getting carried away with my thoughts . . . eally loved your poem, Jovial.
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 4:19 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Jovial - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Jovial, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
A   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Jovial, thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA
Negron Flores Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 4:09 PM
I enjoyed very much this poem Jovial. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
Vigilante Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Thank you, Nayda.
A   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Jovial,, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Vigilante Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Hello Linda, Thank you for the welcome and thank you for the friendship. Jovial.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace