Maybe 17

Sixteen…

Almost 100. 

Might as well be one. 

But either way you have won. 

And so have we. 

Too old for death to be dangerous.

Too sad for death to be restful. 

Sixteen…

Seventeen is waiting for you. 

Just as we are waiting with you.
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May 12, 2023 at 12:52 PM
I suppose Happy Birthday is in order somewhere:)
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