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This song has music that I am working hard to complete. My goal is to do so by the end of the year. Piano lessons are a challenge!

 

May You Find Peace

Heart singing
Come with me
Be free as the breeze

Building dreams
Escaping
All your misery

If you grieve
May you be free
From sorrow and pain

May you be
In a state of peace
Like healing blue rain

May you find peace.

The flower bloom
Is just like you
May your face seek sun

Power in you
Pulls like moon
Prayers for everyone

May you find joy
Fill any void
Explore your happy dreams

May you find
A peace of mind
Wise in spirituality 

May you find peace
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February 10, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Lovely song lyrics.. my suggestion would be to work on a chorus... but it flows well..
Jones Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 12:28 PM
The chorus is more piano music and the lyric may you find peace. It is hard to imagine you have to hear it. :0) Thanks
Elliott Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 9:06 AM
A beauteous and very uplifting song-poem, dear Karen. Quite welcoming too. My very best wishes for your writing and music. All the best and God's blessings to you. ~
Jones Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 9:38 AM
You are kind Regina and I’m enjoying learning even the smallest of skills! Thanks for your wishes! God bless YOU ten fold!
Sands Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Very nice Karen. Good luck with it all :)
Jones Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Heidi!
Marine Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 1:21 AM
A Beautiful, Heartwarming invitation to take that journey of discovery, Karen! "Heart singing Come with me Be free as the breeze..." May you too have Peace, and receive the same loving gifts you share... Than you for being "A Giver of Good Things.." (((Hugs and Good thoughts))) Aqua M.
Jones Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 1:25 AM
Your kind warm spirit and words have blessed my day! Thank you for positive energy and for liking my humble song. Love and light to you Aqua M!
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