May You Find Peace

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This song has music that I am working hard to complete. My goal is to do so by the end of the year. Piano lessons are a challenge!

Heart singing Come with me Be free as the breeze Building dreams Escaping All your misery If you grieve May you be free From sorrow and pain May you be In a state of peace Like healing blue rain May you find peace. The flower bloom Is just like you May your face seek sun Power in you Pulls like moon Prayers for everyone May you find joy Fill any void Explore your happy dreams May you find A peace of mind Wise in spirituality May you find peace

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Silent One

Date: 2/10/2024 11:14:00 AM

Lovely song lyrics.. my suggestion would be to work on a chorus... but it flows well..

Karen Jones
Date: 2/10/2024 12:28:00 PM

The chorus is more piano music and the lyric may you find peace. It is hard to imagine you have to hear it. :0) Thanks

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/9/2024 2:29:00 PM

a heartwarming and inspirational poem, Karen. It will make for a delightful song. Glad to hear your lessons are progressing...admirable to learn the piano--a skill I don't have. There's something to be said for discovery...enjoyed the read...have a great evening, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 2/9/2024 3:00:00 PM

Thanks Sara!

Regina Elliott

Date: 2/9/2024 9:06:00 AM

A beauteous and very uplifting song-poem, dear Karen. Quite welcoming too. My very best wishes for your writing and music. All the best and God's blessings to you. ~

Karen Jones
Date: 2/9/2024 9:38:00 AM

You are kind Regina and I’m enjoying learning even the smallest of skills! Thanks for your wishes! God bless YOU ten fold!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/9/2024 8:11:00 AM

Very nice Karen. Good luck with it all :)

Karen Jones
Date: 2/9/2024 9:37:00 AM

Thanks Heidi!

Aqua Marine

Date: 2/9/2024 1:21:00 AM

A Beautiful, Heartwarming invitation to take that journey of discovery, Karen! "Heart singing Come with me Be free as the breeze..." May you too have Peace, and receive the same loving gifts you share... Than you for being "A Giver of Good Things.." (((Hugs and Good thoughts))) Aqua M.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/9/2024 1:25:00 AM

Your kind warm spirit and words have blessed my day! Thank you for positive energy and for liking my humble song. Love and light to you Aqua M!