May Queen

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As the music flows in my mind and soul, I dance around in the sun kissed fragrant fields, of wildflowers and tall emerald green grass. With a breath of life, the day is near, for I'm favored to be the prettiest maiden. All eyes will be on me in my white lace dress and closed shoes with my hair in curls and a crown of blossoms when I'm honored with the crown of May Queen a symbol of the stillness of nature around in which everything revolves. My friends and neighbors are all excited to be without daily chores. Towns and villages celebrating springtime fertility. Handsome couples gathering bouquets of flowers to decorate the whole town. Early bright is here with a clear blue unclouded sky. I lead the celebration up to the center of town. Old stone buildings and tables are beautifully decorated with redolence blooms. Populace displays all the elegance of their dress. Dress in white, carrying garlands of flowers children follow giggling and dancing. They place a crown of blossoms on my head, I say a speech that I have memorized and set off the festivities, with dance and merriment. Musicians play their musical instruments. Joy is overwhelming with eating, drinking, jubilant music, and curtly lovers dancing around the Maypole. Everyone enjoys crafts, games, and a banquet fit for a King as the music flows in my mind and soul. With a breath of life, I dance around the maypole favored for being the prettiest maiden, honored with being crowned May Queen.
4/17/2015 Children Story

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/15/2019 11:02:00 AM
Beautiful visions of spring and the May Queen celebration your paint with your flowing words, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/15/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra, congratulations to you as well :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/13/2019 3:54:00 PM
Beautiful way to welcome spring! Congrats!
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Date: 3/15/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Juliet:) .. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/13/2019 1:56:00 PM
Eve, this poem is lovely and a celebration! Congratulations on your win on Mile 23 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Only 4 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Date: 3/15/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, Mark, I am very honored to be chosen in your Marathon contest :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/13/2019 1:17:00 PM
Lovely, Eve. Your poem has magical notes of nostalgic bucolic bliss. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/15/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, Line :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/19/2015 8:32:00 AM
Perfect! Well my friend you have surpassed yourself...a pleasant happy poem with a genuine feel good theme...you have captured the spirit and honor associated with being May Queen and shared it with us all. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:07:00 AM
Thank you, Emile, rewrote it because it didn't follow the contest. I tried revising this one for a couple of days and it wouldn't let me so I just entered another one to follow the specs, "Crowned May Queen" Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 4/18/2015 1:34:00 PM
- It is beautifully, Eve - (I like your photo of all the beautiful May queens - they will perfectly fit a king) - I wish you a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2015 2:52:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for reading my poem . Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 4/18/2015 1:18:00 PM
such delightful imagery this has such a lovely flow Eve - I hope this is for the contest I think Isaiah will love it! Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx
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Date: 4/18/2015 1:22:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, it doesn't follow any of his forms. I wrote it before I realized it. Have to fix a form. hugs eve
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