May I Dance With You

The mentioned below incident takes place in a nightclub on 30th October.

   Thundering beats of loud music echoing all around.
Rapid steps thumping the dance floor with exuberance.
   Avid spirits filling the air with intoxicating fragrance.
    Flashing neon lights setting crazy mood unbound.

Inside this bubble of euphoria a girl charmed the crowd.
    Sizzling like a shining s t a r dressed in million sparkles.
        She seductively danced straight in the middle of circles
               like a flickering flame, she awed them all and bowed.

             Mesmerized by her enigma, whole crowd was startled.
        Now every guy in array was jostling to get her attention.
      But she seemed to be a girl with a schemed intention.
She coquettishly glided and chose a guy from the rabble.

As that guy quickly wrapped his arms around her waist,
       countless fireworks of glee flashed through his smirk.
          She treated him with a coy smile and her lips quirked.
                He flamboyantly twirled her into dancing with a jest.

             They were abruptly dancing to the rhythm of the song
         while the crowd  was  watching  them  with frozen eyes.
      She said,  "Do you know, right now I am in a disguise!"
He asked, "Who are you?" Suddenly her tone was strong.

"I am your nightmare baby, Luci Morning Star is my name."
    She replied in a harsh voice and spun with him in swift speed.
      Her attire changed into a hellish look with a demonic greed.
Ravaging fire blazed and the Devil vanished with a final bow in flames.

30th October is the Devil's night out. Be careful and watch out for yourselves Soupers.


Date : 10/17/2016

Note : For the contest (May I dance with you) by Galeo DS.
          *Placed First*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Oh my, you really put a twist on THIS one and that was a cool name reference to Lucifer. Great job, Afzal. And I see Congrats are in order. Well done.
Nusker Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
La France Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Afzal congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderfull penned poem.
Nusker Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 6:08 AM
Thank you very much, B.W.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Wow! Congrats, Afzal!
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November 1, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Thank you, Kim.
May Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 4:20 PM
A fiery dance...Congrats on your win...
Nusker Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Babbit Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 3:57 PM
What a tangled web you weaved. Congrats.
Nusker Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Thank you very much.
Canerdy Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 12:11 PM
A 7 for this fantastic piece--highly descriptive with a cautionary element. Congrats on your win, Afzal! Janice
Nusker Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Thank you very much for the gracious compliment, Janice. I very much value your comments.
Rycroft Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Congrats well-done fabulous x
Nusker Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Thank you, Wendy.
Y. Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Hi Afzal, What a fine win on Halloween day! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Nusker Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Thank you, Alexis.
Gasun Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Afzal. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs!
Nusker Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Thank you very much, Galeo.
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