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May I Dance With You

The mentioned below incident takes place in a nightclub on 30th October. Thundering beats of loud music echoing all around. Rapid steps thumping the dance floor with exuberance. Avid spirits filling the air with intoxicating fragrance. Flashing neon lights setting crazy mood unbound. Inside this bubble of euphoria a girl charmed the crowd. Sizzling like a shining s t a r dressed in million sparkles. She seductively danced straight in the middle of circles like a flickering flame, she awed them all and bowed. Mesmerized by her enigma, whole crowd was startled. Now every guy in array was jostling to get her attention. But she seemed to be a girl with a schemed intention. She coquettishly glided and chose a guy from the rabble. As that guy quickly wrapped his arms around her waist, countless fireworks of glee flashed through his smirk. She treated him with a coy smile and her lips quirked. He flamboyantly twirled her into dancing with a jest. They were abruptly dancing to the rhythm of the song while the crowd was watching them with frozen eyes. She said, "Do you know, right now I am in a disguise!" He asked, "Who are you?" Suddenly her tone was strong. "I am your nightmare baby, Luci Morning Star is my name." She replied in a harsh voice and spun with him in swift speed. Her attire changed into a hellish look with a demonic greed. Ravaging fire blazed and the Devil vanished with a final bow in flames. 30th October is the Devil's night out. Be careful and watch out for yourselves Soupers. Date : 10/17/2016 Note : For the contest (May I dance with you) by Galeo DS. *Placed First*

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Date: 1/10/2017 3:29:00 PM
Oh my, you really put a twist on THIS one and that was a cool name reference to Lucifer. Great job, Afzal. And I see Congrats are in order. Well done.
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Date: 1/10/2017 10:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 11/2/2016 4:29:00 PM
Afzal congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderfull penned poem.
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Date: 11/21/2016 6:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, B.W.
Date: 11/1/2016 8:05:00 AM
Wow! Congrats, Afzal!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/1/2016 11:05:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 10/31/2016 4:20:00 PM
A fiery dance...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 10/31/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 10/31/2016 3:57:00 PM
What a tangled web you weaved. Congrats.
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Date: 10/31/2016 10:26:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/31/2016 12:11:00 PM
A 7 for this fantastic piece--highly descriptive with a cautionary element. Congrats on your win, Afzal! Janice
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/31/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thank you very much for the gracious compliment, Janice. I very much value your comments.
Date: 10/31/2016 11:40:00 AM
Congrats well-done fabulous x
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Date: 10/31/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy.
Date: 10/31/2016 11:24:00 AM
Hi Afzal, What a fine win on Halloween day! Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/31/2016 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis.
Date: 10/31/2016 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Afzal. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/31/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thank you very much, Galeo.

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