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May I Dance With You

Satan rose up high,
Transforming himself,
From a repulsive monster,
Into an angel of light,
Beautiful and handsome,
Halloween his night,
The night he chose himself a bride,
The time nearly twelve o’clock,
The room full of virgins,
Fear and excitement,
Who would he take,
Music played,
The moon full,
Terror as he suddenly appeared,
He looked around the room,
He spotted her,
Walked through the crowd,
Looked into her eyes,
May I dance with you!
Twelve o’clock struck!
They disappeared!

08/10/2016
For contest sponsor Galeo DS

Copyright © Wendy Rycroft | Year Posted 2016

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Joseph May Date: 10/31/2016 4:23:00 PM Congrats on your win Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/31/2016 5:14:00 PM Thank you Joseph x

DM Babbit Date: 10/31/2016 3:58:00 PM The dance macabe, congrats. Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/31/2016 5:14:00 PM Thank you DM x

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/31/2016 12:13:00 PM A 7 for this winning poem, Wendy! Janice Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/31/2016 5:13:00 PM Thank you janis

Afzal Nusker Date: 10/31/2016 11:50:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this excellent poem, Wendy. Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/31/2016 5:13:00 PM Thank you Afzal x

Alexis Y. Date: 10/31/2016 11:39:00 AM Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/31/2016 5:12:00 PM Thank you Alexis x

Len Gasun Date: 10/31/2016 11:03:00 AM Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Wendy. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs! Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/31/2016 11:37:00 AM Thank you Galeo x I enjoyed the theme x

Alexis Y. Date: 10/21/2016 3:47:00 PM Hi Wendy, WoW! This is quite a story. You had my full attention from start to finish. I found it to be full of intrigue. It was alluring as well. Excellent job. I think you just danced your way to the top with this well written write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/22/2016 6:23:00 AM Thank you so much Alexis x

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/10/2016 2:16:00 PM Hi Wendy, a first class poem. I do love the building and the excellent end. All masks throne aside only at the end of his sojourn on earth. I do wish you luck in the contest with this little gem. I hope it does do well for you. I shall fav this one and it does deserve in seven in my eyes. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/10/2016 2:46:00 PM Thank you so much,Vladi xxxxx very kind of you xxx

Sandra Haight Date: 10/10/2016 7:17:00 AM Wendy, your poem is very eery and suspenseful leading up to an unexpected ending. Nicely done, and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/10/2016 8:01:00 AM Thank you Sandra xxxx

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/8/2016 6:42:00 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry Wendy a great poem for Halloween you did a great job. Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/8/2016 7:02:00 PM Thank you, Darlena x

Jan Allison Date: 10/8/2016 2:51:00 PM Great imagery Wendy - I love the unexpected ending!!!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/8/2016 3:02:00 PM Thank you, Jan x