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May I Dance With You

Satan rose up high, Transforming himself, From a repulsive monster, Into an angel of light, Beautiful and handsome, Halloween his night, The night he chose himself a bride, The time nearly twelve o’clock, The room full of virgins, Fear and excitement, Who would he take, Music played, The moon full, Terror as he suddenly appeared, He looked around the room, He spotted her, Walked through the crowd, Looked into her eyes, May I dance with you! Twelve o’clock struck! They disappeared! 08/10/2016 For contest sponsor Galeo DS

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Joseph May

Date: 10/31/2016 4:23:00 PM

Congrats on your win

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/31/2016 5:14:00 PM

Thank you Joseph x

Dm Babbit

Date: 10/31/2016 3:58:00 PM

The dance macabe, congrats.

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/31/2016 5:14:00 PM

Thank you DM x

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/31/2016 12:13:00 PM

A 7 for this winning poem, Wendy! Janice

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/31/2016 5:13:00 PM

Thank you janis

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/31/2016 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent poem, Wendy.

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/31/2016 5:13:00 PM

Thank you Afzal x

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/31/2016 11:39:00 AM

Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/31/2016 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Alexis x

Len Gasun

Date: 10/31/2016 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Wendy. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs!

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/31/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thank you Galeo x I enjoyed the theme x

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/21/2016 3:47:00 PM

Hi Wendy, WoW! This is quite a story. You had my full attention from start to finish. I found it to be full of intrigue. It was alluring as well. Excellent job. I think you just danced your way to the top with this well written write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/22/2016 6:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis x

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/10/2016 2:16:00 PM

Hi Wendy, a first class poem. I do love the building and the excellent end. All masks throne aside only at the end of his sojourn on earth. I do wish you luck in the contest with this little gem. I hope it does do well for you. I shall fav this one and it does deserve in seven in my eyes. Hugs....Mike. XX

Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/10/2016 2:46:00 PM

Thank you so much,Vladi xxxxx very kind of you xxx