May December Romance

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Fireworks went off when we first met, It was a May December romance I don’t regret. He was fifteen years older with sexy blue eyes. I was still in college, naive, and mesmerized. Our touch was like electricity, and we didn’t waste any time. He swept me off my feet, and wedding bells soon chimed! When I think of the sparks that flew on our first date, I know those kind of fireworks you cannot overrate. We are divorced now, but our time then was great, When I married my first love and pledged soulmate. We may have new lives, but the memory is sweet. Our stars collided, and Fate commanded we meet. 9/30/16 First Love Contest Awarded 1st Place

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/8/2016 1:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/8/2016 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Kai Michael.

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/1/2016 10:04:00 AM

Nice to hear a love story without regret. And someone capable of, not losing love, but loving with a larger heart. Lovely read!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/2/2016 11:39:00 PM

Thank you Joe.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/30/2016 6:19:00 PM

Well done, Brenda! I love that you emphasized the gift of him despite the divorce, I believe that can be very true. Through rhyme a story is told that many should relate to and hopefully they are as upbeat about living it. Very good ... CayCay

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/30/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thank you CayCay. When we fell in love it was a magical time I will always remember. The memory of our happy years together cannot be diminished by the divorce.