May December Romance

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Fireworks went off when we first met,
It was a May December romance I don’t regret.
He was fifteen years older with sexy blue eyes.
I was still in college, naive, and mesmerized.

Our touch was like electricity, and we didn’t waste any time.
He swept me off my feet, and wedding bells soon chimed!
When I think of the sparks that flew on our first date,
I know those kind of fireworks you cannot overrate.

We are divorced now, but our time then was great,
When I married my first love and pledged soulmate.
We may have new lives, but the memory is sweet.
Our stars collided, and Fate commanded we meet.






9/30/16
First Love Contest
Awarded 1st Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/8/2016 1:14:00 AM
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/8/2016 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Kai Michael.
Date: 10/1/2016 10:04:00 AM
Nice to hear a love story without regret. And someone capable of, not losing love, but loving with a larger heart. Lovely read!
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/2/2016 11:39:00 PM
Thank you Joe.
Date: 9/30/2016 6:19:00 PM
Well done, Brenda! I love that you emphasized the gift of him despite the divorce, I believe that can be very true. Through rhyme a story is told that many should relate to and hopefully they are as upbeat about living it. Very good ... CayCay
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/30/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thank you CayCay. When we fell in love it was a magical time I will always remember. The memory of our happy years together cannot be diminished by the divorce.
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