May Day

Alone, all alone stand I
As the merciless waves 
loose rage on this old oak 
vessel.
Alas, the Captain long gone
Hears not the yell of an 
erring Deck Hand.
Asleep was I when abandon 
ship was sounded
Now I know not which to 
save
My helpless self or this half 
sunk vessel?
Both long doomed to crawl 
the depth of this restless 
sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 21, 2011 at 1:04 AM
a very deep poem,, to seek.. Enjoyed stopping by your poem tonight..have a good one,..LINDA
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November 20, 2011 at 4:46 AM
Resonant imagery of doom, Esson.
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