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May Birthday

I think of childhood birthdays when ‘another year’ was always cool; it meant a party, action men* - and, best of all, a day off school. *like GI Joe Jack Horne for Carol’s Memories of May contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/9/2012 4:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win...wow, a day off school..doesnt happen here...( well officially anyway...) BG
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Date: 5/9/2012 9:22:00 AM
Jack, Congrats. on your worthy three spot, . Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/9/2012 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Jack Great memory. Nice going. Best to you. Ralph
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Date: 5/9/2012 7:45:00 AM
Jack congrats on yoru win..David
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Date: 5/9/2012 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my "Memories Of May" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/5/2012 9:03:00 PM
revisiting this cutie poem!! "another year of a birthday" is not so cool anymore.hahaha.
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Date: 4/19/2012 7:34:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Jack. Have a great day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 11:07:00 PM
Great write...
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Date: 4/18/2012 2:56:00 PM
Jack, you are so good with short poems. I 'd love to see a book in which all your short poems were inside it. Keep making more and more and one day, please put them all in a book for me to read!!
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Date: 4/18/2012 2:33:00 PM
I too have a Maytime birthday....however, no action men Hahaha...unless they are 'flesh and blood'.... LOL !!! What a cute poem Jack!
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Date: 4/18/2012 1:36:00 PM
Soda and buns party....sweet.... - Wish you luck in contest Jack ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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