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May and Charlie

Extra buxom pirate name of May Would not give Charlie the time of day But he got her to dance And they did every chance They live happily on Fox Trot Bay

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/27/2019 5:48:00 AM

Delightful Limerick with happy ending dear, Caren. Loved it!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/27/2019 4:12:00 PM

I just could not resist it once I had the buxom pirate I knew I was going to have to use her.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/26/2019 5:15:00 PM

Cute, cuter, cutest! Isn't that Fox Trot Bay just a cha-cha-cha from Jitterbug Way?! Nicely done limerick, Caren! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/26/2019 5:50:00 PM

Thank you Gershon. I may try more limericks now that I think I "have got it".

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2019 11:42:00 AM

Cute cute cute!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/26/2019 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Kim. I am not reading today. I am only writing, but I will be reading later. The reading inspires so much more writing!