May 29th 2010

I saw you from a far. Then you noticed me
You smiled and so did I.
Your eye's opened my world and I became alive.
Dreams of you with those green eyes.
I never knew I would be standing here , you standing there
Ready to embrace the love that we share.
I am there for you body and soul.
Until we both grow old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Nice write enjoyed it, marvin
Roberts Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 11:15 PM
lovely poem
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August 20, 2010 at 9:39 PM
WoW! i feel the vow's coming to live thru your poem. Enjoyed your favorite day,..p.d.
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