May 10 '78

Too early for the skies to clear
Yet cracks and stabs lace the cover.
The cracks
   they widen'till the blue emerged,
The rays from spots brightened.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Wm. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 9:29 PM
Very nice. I am wondering if it was just a day important for you or whether it was something historical!
Paul Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 11:16 AM
No, most likely the day it was written
Michelle Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 5:15 PM
Amazing talents you have, writing among them, putting images to words another. Thanks so much for sharing, I hope to read more of yours :) empathy is strong in my reading today =Juli-Michelle=
Paul Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 11:17 AM
Thanks so much for the nice comment. Sorry it took so long to respond, but my lap top does not seem to have the respond mode.
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