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May 10 '78

Too early for the skies to clear Yet cracks and stabs lace the cover. The cracks they widen'till the blue emerged, The rays from spots brightened.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/22/2012 11:21:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Wm. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:29:00 PM
Very nice. I am wondering if it was just a day important for you or whether it was something historical!
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:16:00 AM
No, most likely the day it was written
Date: 5/21/2012 5:15:00 PM
Amazing talents you have, writing among them, putting images to words another. Thanks so much for sharing, I hope to read more of yours :) empathy is strong in my reading today =Juli-Michelle=
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:17:00 AM
Thanks so much for the nice comment. Sorry it took so long to respond, but my lap top does not seem to have the respond mode.

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