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Max With Rainfall

As I study “Without Borders” it begins to rain and I drift in and out of reality. —quote by poet MAX with rainfall the hammer of rainfall counterbalanced with bold red round sun, nearly a world within a world of color white clouds like dancing spooks across the rotund belly of impassioned sun verdant green leaves mask the rain- clouds…dim light that boat appears when my eyes drop like rain, i feel my mood change i can see splatters of red, yellow, blue lightly hitting the river headed for me the hues are not primary but rather salmon, blueberry and banana-creme —then the sails, lift me above the waters, smaller than the sun but distinct the placid vessel rests as do i - no turning back and the rains have stopped as i look away 4/8/2023

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Date: 4/9/2023 1:45:00 AM
Dear Kim, you deserve more reads. Thoughts transverse thoughts and make you appreciate your poetic vision.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2023 5:56:00 AM
Thank you so much! Could be it’s a holiday! I need to read more but am busy today! Happy Easter, my friend!

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