Max and the Snake

~~Max And The Snake~~ Max is scared of spiders Insects and butterflies too He doesn’t like kittens or cats But he likes a rabbit or two. Max is adorable and he has only just turned three Blond hair and blue eyes and a face so full of glee . He’s not that keen on dogs either, so I did a double take When his mum sent me a photograph Of Max, wrapped up in a snake. He is standing smiling widely His impish face is set alight A five foot snake all over him And he’s laughing with delight. His mum was not there at this particular time She would have screamed down the place If she had known there was this Crime She thought about complaining and I think she had a case She said she nearly fainted, to see a snake on Max’s face. Her friend reassured his mum, no harm would the snake do He had not long ago eaten, a great big rat or two It will be a long time before the snake needs to be fed So Max can play with snakey, the Ex-babysitter said. Max’s mum looked at her, a bewildered look upon her face But Max jumped up and kissed his mum, and said, “that would be ace”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/7/2013 8:57:00 AM
This is a cute and creative write. Its imaginative and full of fun. It tells a cute little story. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Bridges poem. I appreciate it.
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Date: 12/7/2012 10:03:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Fascinating Rhyming Great story line enjoyed YOUR blog this morning LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/13/2011 2:45:00 PM
I can't say I'd like to be wrapped in one but am happy Max got through the ordeal :)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/14/2011 1:27:00 AM
He wants a pet one now, mummy says no Thanks for reading it and commenting x
Date: 12/13/2011 9:12:00 AM
Snakes get a bad wrap. I'm glad that Max liked his.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/13/2011 10:07:00 AM
Its a lovely photo x
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