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Mauritius

My motherland, the land of four colors, the land of sweetness As is described by its rich history, filled with wars and battles United it stands today, giving freedom to each and every son of its soil Revered as the land of the sun, sea and sand, the beaches, the golden skin It is where was found the lost Dodo, killed till its last by those hungry colonizers The land where I took birth, the land I admire, the land away from which I shall not survive Imagination pours strongly in every corner of this island, be it in songs or in poetry Unmistakably the jewel of all the Indian Ocean Sweet is its fragrance, sweet is its beauty, my homeland it is! A small retreat surrounded by the blue lagoon Loved by all those who upon seeing its nature, do swoon!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/22/2014 1:50:00 PM
Awesome write. Big congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/22/2014 4:23:00 AM
A very beautiful poem and place I would love to visit one day. Congratulations on your First Place win with this gem!
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Date: 4/21/2014 11:12:00 AM
you make it sound very beautiful. What a wonderful world we have Nice writing. Love, Joyce
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:30:00 AM
thk you so much :)
Date: 4/21/2014 7:17:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS.. :) i have never been there but i had read it lots in books.. :) nice and nice and nice.. :), olive eloisa.. :)
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:31:00 AM
thks so much, do come to visit someday
Date: 4/21/2014 7:14:00 AM
FANTASTIC WIN!! Congrats. Beautiful poem and tribute to your homeland!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:32:00 AM
Thk you :)
Date: 4/21/2014 6:45:00 AM
Lovely flowing description. Congratulations on your top win!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:32:00 AM
Thks so much
Date: 4/21/2014 5:38:00 AM
congrats on your win - lovely tribute to your country. Hugs Jan x
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:33:00 AM
Thks :)
Date: 4/21/2014 12:51:00 AM
I am proud of neighbour nation . Congrats on a fine win, Anoucheka
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:34:00 AM
Thks so much Dr...Really it's wonderful to write of one's country and to be placed first!
Date: 4/20/2014 11:37:00 PM
Beautiful Anoucheka! Congratulations on your first place win... Verlena
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:34:00 AM
Thks you :)
Date: 4/20/2014 11:27:00 PM
As lovely a poem as your country Anoucheka ! Congrats on great top win !
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:35:00 AM
Thks so much :)
Date: 4/20/2014 11:11:00 PM
A wonderful write and so your win, congrats dear...
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 4/21/2014 11:36:00 AM
thks :)

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