Mauritius

My motherland, the land of four colors, the land of sweetness As is described by its rich history, filled with wars and battles United it stands today, giving freedom to each and every son of its soil Revered as the land of the sun, sea and sand, the beaches, the golden skin It is where was found the lost Dodo, killed till its last by those hungry colonizers The land where I took birth, the land I admire, the land away from which I shall not survive Imagination pours strongly in every corner of this island, be it in songs or in poetry Unmistakably the jewel of all the Indian Ocean Sweet is its fragrance, sweet is its beauty, my homeland it is! A small retreat surrounded by the blue lagoon Loved by all those who upon seeing its nature, do swoon!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Oyewole Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Awesome write. Big congrats on your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 4:23 AM
A very beautiful poem and place I would love to visit one day. Congratulations on your First Place win with this gem!
Johnson Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:12 AM
you make it sound very beautiful. What a wonderful world we have Nice writing. Love, Joyce
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:30 AM
thk you so much :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:17 AM
CONGRATULATIONS.. :) i have never been there but i had read it lots in books.. :) nice and nice and nice.. :), olive eloisa.. :)
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:31 AM
thks so much, do come to visit someday
Wegman Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:14 AM
FANTASTIC WIN!! Congrats. Beautiful poem and tribute to your homeland!
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Thk you :)
Gibson Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Lovely flowing description. Congratulations on your top win!
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Thks so much
Allison Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 5:38 AM
congrats on your win - lovely tribute to your country. Hugs Jan x
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:33 AM
Thks :)
Mehta Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 12:51 AM
I am proud of neighbour nation . Congrats on a fine win, Anoucheka
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:34 AM
Thks so much Dr...Really it's wonderful to write of one's country and to be placed first!
Walker  Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:37 PM
Beautiful Anoucheka! Congratulations on your first place win... Verlena
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:34 AM
Thks you :)
A. Sharma Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:27 PM
As lovely a poem as your country Anoucheka ! Congrats on great top win !
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:35 AM
Thks so much :)
Garg Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:11 PM
A wonderful write and so your win, congrats dear...
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:36 AM
thks :)
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