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Maureen, Molly and Hens

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There are some sad things that happen, and here is a story of love broken . . . Maureen lived in a small quaint house, with her dog, hens and maybe a mouse; but she was getting old and forgetful, and Molly her dog was also old and feeble. Maureen's health declined and she became needful, now, neighbors take old Molly for a walk, the hens were sold- hope not for the cookpot; in a care home Maureen just looks at the clock. This tale of sadness doesn't end right there, with old Maureen alone, no one to care; a carer moved in there, to cook and clean: Maureen is now the happiest I've seen! The carer Pascale is so very kind; she doesn't mind Maureen has lost her mind; they go on walks in parks, the dog behind, or tea in cafes, rides by bus or train . . . She loves to stay inside her own domain; an end for sure to all Maureen's old pain! As for the hens- they all have found a forever home. ___________________________ February 11, 2018 Collaboration between Broken Wings and Jack Horne Poetry/Rhyme/True Story/Maureen, Molly and Hens Copyright Protected, ID 18-9936-52-01 All Rights Reserved. Collaboration

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Date: 2/18/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thanks for writing with me, my friend xx
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Date: 2/11/2018 5:17:00 PM
Nice collaboration! Makes for an interesting story!
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Date: 2/11/2018 4:34:00 PM
We can all relate to this be it an old relative or friend. The advancing years can take its toll. A very thought provoking poem beautifully done. Regards Tom.
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