Maturity For Adult Contest

Maturity              "For Adult Contest"     

I walked in to the truth, when I became a man; maturity hit me
Like a cotton sock filled with sour notes and hormone-hubris shouts,
The Women I’d adored I saw as more now; poised and wise with hearts, coal

Mine deep; and best of all now, friends, with whom to speak and leap and laugh
At life, like planets to their crisp earth’s Crops, to reap and play and listen to
A woman’s many layers, complete yet changing like a cyclone, or perfume’s

Flowery flame: but: there’s the sexual thing, a man’s God; the angels his beds, and notches
The fiction that he is boss, and cannot ever cry, or talk about the pain within (a sin) thus
Shields his contrite speech, to favour stormy bluster, with she, his partner in their fair

And stormy lair; but now, the beasts gone out I’ll say, my wife, my lover, my gorgeous friend, 
Tougher then a car of shot gun-crazy cops; we’ll rest a while, and now, unlike before, we’ll Share your favorite sugar, your sweetest loving cup; I’ll do for you, what came so hard, for me, in years gone by;  before growing as a man:

I’ll listen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Hi Peter sweet win...Linda
A  Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 5:30 PM
PETER, congrats on your Screwed III win. SKAT
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 9:34 AM
dropping back with my congrats in the screwed II contest :-) Hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 2:19 AM
Great descriptive write Peter love your take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 7:37 PM
LOve the message of your poem, Peter. The sign of a matured man!!
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