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Matthew

He forced his way in 'Matthew' they said his name was He completely blew a hole in our lives Obliterating out modest homes Like a deck of cards life was tumbling before our eyes Those who tried to stand firm against him were picked up and cast away to one side as if meagre grains of sand What we lost then cannot be replaced It's the evidential costs of his wanton eye the specifics of reality that were plucked tossed and stolen He cared not that he was taking their hearts and ours Those families - villages - towns and nations were left to pick up pieces and count the cost of his unruly behaviour The families in particular of Haiti and Florida will be scarred from surviving his outrage and many tears will fall because of our inability to tame this monster from his rampage and prevent him from leaving in his unashamed sulk only then to be replaced by the next perpetrator wreaking havoc with their power and control over the threads of life dangling in its wake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/22/2017 1:32:00 PM
Ah, gotcha - Hurricane Matthew. I clicked on this poem because Matthew is my son's name. Great poem, glad I found it - ain't life arbitrary sometimes? And fragile, too, in the face of nature's limitless power.
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 4/25/2017 3:36:00 AM
Thanks Tony, your comments on nature so right of course. I'm so glad you stumbled upon this poem even because of your son's name. Incidentally I nearly called my boys Matthew but there were so many baby's in the hospital with same name at that time I chose otherwise.
Date: 10/24/2016 5:05:00 AM
Great imagery and deep.... Congrats Anna, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 10/24/2016 5:32:00 AM
Thanks for your kindness of comment and visit Teddy, good to see you here.
Date: 10/19/2016 8:28:00 AM
The name they chose for this one is somewhat Ironic. Matthew means Gift from God. Great personification, a very sad reality for so many.
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 10/19/2016 11:40:00 AM
Hadn't thought of that Richard, yes very strange one to pick - maybe a warped sense of humour? Appreciate your coming by to read and comment! Thank you.
Date: 10/11/2016 12:36:00 AM
it's very curious how we give them names, and you really did a great personification of this most unwelcome visitor, Anna-marie. Long time no see, HOw are you?
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 10/11/2016 8:38:00 AM
Hey good to see you - hugs, yeah still much the same this end, thanks. Appreciate your never ending views my friend... glad you found a new one! Anything new to tell? How are you doing?

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