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Matsuo Basho Haikus For Life

A morning spell freshly proposed comes quietly in yesterday's ambient air pushes out of the screen archaic puffs of stale what meanders out is the remnants of me before the crisis caught between hope and despair I take to daydreaming alone again in my bed Jan 12, 2022 Sponsor Damned I-Be Contest Name HAIKU CONTEST inspired by BASHO

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Anil Deo
Date: 1/13/2022 4:42:00 AM
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Masterly work, Vie. Anil
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 1/12/2022 5:20:00 PM
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Since I still don't understand some of these types of poetry, I loved this. I thought it helped me understand haikus a little more. Beautiful.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/12/2022 5:54:00 PM
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I don't either Virginia, just trucking along learning and goofing and having some fun, thanks for reading
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/12/2022 9:57:00 AM
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Short Basho poems are not my forte, but as normal haikus, I loved them all. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/12/2022 5:53:00 PM
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Not sure I did them right, but I tried Victor, thanks for reading
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2022 9:16:00 AM
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The third line of every stanza says Basho--and the last haiku says it all.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/12/2022 5:53:00 PM
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Thank you Vijay for reading my haiku, blessings.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/12/2022 8:16:00 AM
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I like this one very much, MRR. I don't know if it's what Damned I-Be is looking for, but it's a keeper in my humble opinion. Good luck!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/12/2022 5:53:00 PM
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not sure either Milton, haikus are not my forte, I just tried one , heh I had fun, thanks for dropping in

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