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Written for the contest "Reflections of the Past,Visions of the Future." Sponsored by Daniel Henry R. 

maternal mermaid

life ~ a marine carousel of soul-cracks
 an odyssey of thorns and memories,
               a reverie 
                     of regrets and roses.
and I a mere spectator
of my own circus~
I reminisce
 lost in the eyes of bleeding skies,
tracing colors within
  the celestial 
casket of cryptic lies,
emanating funeral embers
           of deceased innocence,
blanketed in buried trauma,
six feet beneath 
         familiar footsteps
that stomped butterfly blossoms,
oblivious to the suppressed cries
leaving an ache
between 
   suffocating ribs…
but will saccharine stars 
ever reveal 
     stories left unsaid,
as every cocktail I sipped
was but a 
wistful concoction of chaos…

O beloved moon,
forgive the dreariness of
the deadliest midnight
mirroring grief
like a paradox 
of paralyzed peonies…
I’ve long been a victim
of soulless ghosts,
sold to the scorching gold
  that the narcissistic sun
served on sinister platters~
  as if I were not human,
as if k a r m a slept in 
            the arms of mythical tales….

yet I am all that the
cold fangs of destiny 
failed to unravel
I am k i n d n e s s, 
 awaiting kaleidoscopic rain.
I am l o v e , 
longing to lace 
      lakes of hurt with light…
I am p e a c e, 
painting pages of loneliness 
             with perfumed prose.
I am h o p e , 
delicate yet unbreakable.
I am t i m e , 
         fleeting and untamable.

so if tomorrow
I forget syllables of serenity
to embellish 
     introspective i n k 
with whimsical wisps of wisdom
and redolent runes of resilience
remember 
I refuse to 
drown in 
      delusions 
            and despair
for I will swim 
       against treacherous tides
facing satanic seas 
             in falcon fortitude~
a maternal mermaid
s u r f i n g  away
from mundane misery,
as I taste the tender sparks
of turquoise 
           tomorrows 
amidst the seething storms,
          veiling the saffron
between 
      softened streaks
                      of dulcet dusks...
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Date: 4/20/2025 9:55:00 PM
"six feet beneath familiar footsteps that stomped butterfly blossoms" what a metaphor
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Date: 4/13/2025 5:36:00 PM
IE, the first part of this poem creates a symphony of remorse. I like how you did this since it reminds me how destructive this this type of thinking really is. Then in the second half of the poem you talk about a lot of different techniques available to live in the present. There's a very good lesson in this contest entry. I'm thinking life is a contest too and how we win is by following the second half strategy!!! Smiles!!
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Date: 4/12/2025 9:47:00 AM
You are indeed kindness, love, peace, hope and time! :)
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Date: 4/12/2025 12:49:00 AM
enjoyed your beautiful poetry, and the hope she conveys;, ooppps already commented
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Date: 4/11/2025 11:52:00 PM
a marine carousel of soul-cracks an odyssey of thorns and memories,a reverie of regrets and roses... mmm that opening sets a very gorgeous tone.. tracing colors within the celestial casket of cryptic lies, oooooo yessss !!! Tell em child!!! mirroring grief like a paradox of paralyzed peonies…. Mmmm Yet I am all that the cold fangs of destiny failed to unravel …only u can weave such pain into beautiful ornaments papi!!! I refuse to drown in delusions and despair, for I will swim against treacherous tides, Ooo strength and alliterations !!! Love those combo!! This piece is absolutely divine papi!!
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Date: 4/11/2025 6:33:00 PM
Oh dear Ink, I believe you are timeless, time stands still each time I read your poetry. love xo
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Date: 4/11/2025 2:12:00 PM
another beautiful poem, the poet must fight the inner demons, and find relief in the beauty of the world, enjoyed the message of your gracious poem have a nice week end poet
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Date: 4/11/2025 1:31:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Love how you opened with a carousel. I have been riding it around and round all my life. Hahaha!!! Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a great/blessed weekend writing away..............
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Date: 4/11/2025 12:59:00 PM
Another masterpiece ! Loved reading it .
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