MATERNAL GIFTS

Baby powder soft, warm security comfort - worthiness restored. Rocking, patting my back cures - Maternal gifts give lifelong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Koomoa  Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 6:14 PM
A wonderful Tanka entry. Such a great feeling poem too.
Callus Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 6:50 AM
This emits lovely and calm feelings, CayCay...a gift in itself! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
Nau Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Ah who wouldn't want to smell of baby powder and be rocked in the arms of those protecting us in childhood making our worlds Loving and safe! Like it!
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Sweet as can be, my beautiful friend!!
Leiser Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Lovely and sweet tanka poem here, CayCay! This brings back memories for me... :)
Allison Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 3:18 PM
oh do beautiful and gentle CayCay I love it - good luck:-) hugs jan xx
Richards Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 2:45 PM
This has such a gentle and loving nature. Quite lovely, Caycay !!
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