Materialistic Sorrow

Materialistic Sorrow It’s not a gun Or the funny rope The crooked cross On the pale tomb Or leaf of the wreath Dog puking blood And seeing two moons On a single perception It’s all a materialistic sorrow And – That’s what – - I’m not - talking about.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 29, 2014 at 4:51 PM
PINAKI, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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March 26, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Pinaki, loved the flow of the poem in the form. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest. Sorry it took so long to say so.
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March 23, 2014 at 10:02 PM
Thanks all.
Mehta Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, pinaki
Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 2:42 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ranjan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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July 10, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Sara
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