Mate

When you feel your pockets empty
and your stomach treats you cruel,
someone will read beyond your eyes
and see the proudest fool.

I met him somewhere in the past,
when he was passing through,
I can’t forget the act of faith,   
and what someone chose to do.

Maybe someday the wheel will turn,
he'll be where I now be.
I'll be picking out a proud man’s face,
who once was fair to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 2/21/2021 2:48:00 PM
You done good Thanks Mate !
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 7:18:00 PM
Hello Jerry ... no worries at all - Lindsay
Date: 2/7/2021 10:23:00 AM
Cast your bread upon the waters and you will find that after many days it will return unto you. In other words whatever you dish out is returned. What goes around comes around. etc.etc.etc. You get the picture. A fine write my friend. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2021 4:59:00 PM
Hello Judy ... thanks for reading and commenting. What you wrote needs to be heeded more often - stay safe Judy - Lindsay
Date: 2/5/2021 9:26:00 AM
I Like this poem and will fave it, It is good feeling poem and one i would like to reread at times- one never knows what the future holds. Well penned my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2021 4:56:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... thank you once again Jennifer. We never know what comforting we may need in the future, and to know there's a good Mate to help us through is the comfort - catch you soon Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 2/4/2021 7:42:00 PM
Do others some good as everyone should. Do things the right way, and you will be rewarded someday.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2021 4:52:00 PM
G'day Robert ... absolutely. How you treat other people is how you should expect to be treated yourself - thanks once again Robert - Lindsay
Date: 2/3/2021 7:48:00 PM
Tit for tat, measure for measure, what goes around comes around... Now I'm gonna make a poem out of that... Great message, Lindsay! Cheers, Gershon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2021 4:50:00 PM
Thank you Gershon ... look forward to reading your poem. Pleased you enjoyed this verse - Lindsay
Date: 2/3/2021 1:21:00 PM
Hence man's preference for the roll of the dice over the roll of a wheel? Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2021 4:38:00 PM
Hello Rico ... True Rico. We are social animals and find being friendless very hard to take. Covid has highlighted this - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 2/3/2021 9:20:00 AM
Brilliant verse, Lindsay - Bob H
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2021 4:33:00 PM
Hello Bob ... Thank you Bob. Pleased you enjoyed this poem - Lindsay
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