Masterstroke

Your presence gives me pleasure;
 
I avoid looking
still I see your graceful heel elevate and wait 
I notice your neck tilt
I feel you're palpitations 
I have felt this before
   
Now, l want more 

Your cheek is flush 
the final touch
 
A master stroke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Eastman Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 9:31 AM
Very romantic... Your thoughts always brings us right where you want us...
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December 25, 2011 at 7:57 PM
i can see the playful smile here, indeed a master stroke. hope you have a great day in Xmas day, wishing you A Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year!
Neels Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Absolutely love this David!!!
Larocca Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 8:15 PM
I really liked this one. I will definitely be checking out more of your work. Thanks for the visit today. Kim
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