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Masterstroke

Your presence gives me pleasure; I avoid looking still I see your graceful heel elevate and wait I notice your neck tilt I feel you're palpitations I have felt this before Now, l want more Your cheek is flush the final touch A master stroke

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Date: 2/4/2012 9:31:00 AM
Very romantic... Your thoughts always brings us right where you want us...
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Date: 12/25/2011 7:57:00 PM
i can see the playful smile here, indeed a master stroke. hope you have a great day in Xmas day, wishing you A Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/18/2011 11:09:00 AM
Absolutely love this David!!!
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Date: 12/17/2011 8:15:00 PM
I really liked this one. I will definitely be checking out more of your work. Thanks for the visit today. Kim
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