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Masterpiece

Masterpiece

 By James Marshall Goff





picture 

                    our planet


                                        framed in


                                                    ~LOVE~LOVE~
                                                    L                  L
                                                    O      our      O 
                                                    V    planet     V
                                                    E                  E
                                                    ~LOVE~LOVE~

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Augustus Black

Date: 8/31/2016 12:01:00 AM

The love of the Christ for our planet. Great stuff.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 5/4/2016 2:36:00 PM

This is a Sweet ~7 if I can't give it a ~10!! An aptly named Senryu!!! hope this message gets to you...I have wondered where you went??:)...peace James, jill

Edith D Eutsler

Date: 4/20/2015 2:24:00 PM

Our planet is Truly Framed in Love.. GOD"S LOVE!

John Freeman

Date: 6/22/2009 4:18:00 PM

Great illustration, with a good substance, to back it up,

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 6/12/2009 9:06:00 PM

well thought out...

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 6/10/2009 6:38:00 AM

James...so clever and so true. As John sang in his "Imagination"...what a world this would be if we could do this. Patricia

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/28/2009 7:13:00 PM

Yes, James. This is definitely a masterpiece. Excellent senryu. Lovingly, Dane

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/23/2009 5:29:00 PM

Creative James. Better for us than Ozone. Vince

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/20/2009 10:18:00 AM

this is a great image to have. A vision of love in a world chaos.....very good!

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/20/2009 7:20:00 AM

i always do

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 5/20/2009 6:39:00 AM

Simple yet very elegant. Actually took me a while until I figured out the frame aspect of the 'painting'. I love the visuals. Now let me turn CNN back on and see what they have to report on for our planet today...something good I hope. -Yoni

Alley Poe

Date: 5/19/2009 6:51:00 PM

Brillant!!!! -Alley

David Smalling

Date: 5/19/2009 9:22:00 AM

O boy! Then even I would be surrounded by the desire of my heart ... very inspirational. Bravo

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/18/2009 5:53:00 PM

Bravo!!! Stands in applause! You are a Master of peace my friend. ;)

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/18/2009 11:29:00 AM

And picture a time of eternal peace ... and you and I brother could sing our songs from sea to sea dancing to the Tchaikovsky of the waves ... great moment to be alive, my friend, thanks for being there. Love always.

Brian Strand

Date: 5/17/2009 11:18:00 PM

Excellent work Jim two poems in one.One for my favourites..Thank you for your welcome blog comment Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/17/2009 9:10:00 AM

this love pictured so beautiful framed in my heart and going to my favs---bravo

Daver Austin

Date: 5/17/2009 6:30:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL! That kite gotta soar, baby! Love, daver

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/16/2009 7:33:00 PM

BRILLIANT Jim! Love every word and at the end the lovely form you used is effective and eye catching, You provoke a nice thought too! Thank you for commenting kindly on my work, always appreciated.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/16/2009 6:20:00 PM

Very well done. Like the layout also. Thanks for the comment. Nate

P Sheart

Date: 5/16/2009 8:53:00 AM

Jim Way to go! This says it all....Ahhhh, I can feel the love. Awesome indeed. One of my favorites for sure. With no religion the world really could unite in the spirit of love, no strings attached!Thanks for your inspiring comments on my latest Visions. I appreciate your sentiments very much. Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Look forward to reading more of your outstanding poems in the future! Love Light Truth Patricia