James Marshall Goff Poet Senryu

Masterpiece

Masterpiece

 By James Marshall Goff





picture 

                    our planet


                                        framed in


                                                    ~LOVE~LOVE~
                                                    L                  L
                                                    O      our      O 
                                                    V    planet     V
                                                    E                  E
                                                    ~LOVE~LOVE~

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Augustus Black August 31, 2016 at 12:01 AM The love of the Christ for our planet. Great stuff.

Jill Spagnola May 4, 2016 at 2:36 PM This is a Sweet ~7 if I can't give it a ~10!! An aptly named Senryu!!! hope this message gets to you...I have wondered where you went??:)...peace James, jill

Edith D Eutsler April 20, 2015 at 2:24 PM Our planet is Truly Framed in Love.. GOD"S LOVE!

John Freeman June 22, 2009 at 4:18 PM Great illustration, with a good substance, to back it up,

Valerie Bellefleur June 12, 2009 at 9:06 PM well thought out...

Patricia Langston-Moran June 10, 2009 at 6:38 AM James...so clever and so true. As John sang in his "Imagination"...what a world this would be if we could do this. Patricia

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 28, 2009 at 7:13 PM Yes, James. This is definitely a masterpiece. Excellent senryu. Lovingly, Dane

Vince Suzadail Jr. May 23, 2009 at 5:29 PM Creative James. Better for us than Ozone. Vince

Abe Lopez May 20, 2009 at 10:18 AM this is a great image to have. A vision of love in a world chaos.....very good!

Brandy Megens May 20, 2009 at 7:20 AM i always do

Yoni Dvorkis May 20, 2009 at 6:39 AM Simple yet very elegant. Actually took me a while until I figured out the frame aspect of the 'painting'. I love the visuals. Now let me turn CNN back on and see what they have to report on for our planet today...something good I hope. -Yoni

Alley Poe May 19, 2009 at 6:51 PM Brillant!!!! -Alley

David Smalling May 19, 2009 at 9:22 AM O boy! Then even I would be surrounded by the desire of my heart ... very inspirational. Bravo

Izzy Gumbo May 18, 2009 at 5:53 PM Bravo!!! Stands in applause! You are a Master of peace my friend. ;)

L'Nass Shango May 18, 2009 at 11:29 AM And picture a time of eternal peace ... and you and I brother could sing our songs from sea to sea dancing to the Tchaikovsky of the waves ... great moment to be alive, my friend, thanks for being there. Love always.

Brian Strand May 17, 2009 at 11:18 PM Excellent work Jim two poems in one.One for my favourites..Thank you for your welcome blog comment Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop May 17, 2009 at 9:10 AM this love pictured so beautiful framed in my heart and going to my favs---bravo

Daver Austin May 17, 2009 at 6:30 AM BEAUTIFUL! That kite gotta soar, baby! Love, daver

Charlene Bird May 16, 2009 at 7:33 PM BRILLIANT Jim! Love every word and at the end the lovely form you used is effective and eye catching, You provoke a nice thought too! Thank you for commenting kindly on my work, always appreciated.

Nathan Leccese May 16, 2009 at 6:20 PM Very well done. Like the layout also. Thanks for the comment. Nate

P Sheart May 16, 2009 at 8:53 AM Jim Way to go! This says it all....Ahhhh, I can feel the love. Awesome indeed. One of my favorites for sure. With no religion the world really could unite in the spirit of love, no strings attached!Thanks for your inspiring comments on my latest Visions. I appreciate your sentiments very much. Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Look forward to reading more of your outstanding poems in the future! Love Light Truth Patricia

Debbie Guzzi May 16, 2009 at 6:19 AM Wowser! There'd have to be an end to organized religion and geopolitical borders! I'm for it! Light & Love

Kristin Reynolds May 16, 2009 at 3:58 AM that would be nioce, wouldn't it? lovely, love, Kristin

Laura Mckenzie May 15, 2009 at 1:51 PM James Wow very clever form and a wonderful thought of what the world could be! Laura :)

Raul Moreno May 15, 2009 at 9:44 AM I wish there was more of it in our world, nice work James...Raul

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