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Mastermind String bean of a youth because of an eating disorder Found a cure for that ailment called Mary Jane Grown a little bit south of the Tijuana border Fleet of both feet and wit, Oop’s I forgot about the tongue And a magnet for lots of chicks both old and young Speaking quite softly yet carrying a very big stick at all times A quick grasp of the English language both written And spoken with the sweetness of rhymes Became an object of more senseless violence not just To the mother of step but also bullies, racist and wanna be thugs, Rejected the life of a loser being involved in crime and drugs More interested in science, the stars and history that was past, They hated me even more each day for the A's I scored in every class Evolution’s calling that puberty heralds were the same for him as all others Cupid's onslaught of bows and arrows went over my head Years of mistreatment were turned around from foe to friend Finally he could distinguish the difference between love and lust And eventually learned of those who knew of honor that were worthy of trust Elevation of status from nerd and geek to the conquering lord of hood boys and girls Showed the masses of lost children treasure, not of diamonds, rubies and pearls Taught them pente, mahjong, backgammon, and chess Opened in their eyes many new worlds limited by the world not thought In the hopes that one more spirit such as he had been rises from the mire And is destined for a place of ascension in the azure skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/26/2016 7:46:00 PM
Edward Ford, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:37:00 PM
Edward....if you don't share some work on PS I will hunt you down!! I am not too pretty either....it will be an ugly situation. lol missing you!!
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:44:00 PM
Edward, have not seen you in a while....enjoyed this poem today!
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:24:00 AM
Come back Edward and write more poems for us. This one is so cool. Thank you for commenting on my poem..BG
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Date: 4/6/2010 10:22:00 AM
Intresting! Nice read.
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:35:00 PM
This is a lovely write. Full of 'you' it seems. :)
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Date: 2/25/2010 8:18:00 PM
I luv this poem Edward.. u encompass all the things that one tries in their lifetime to experience life to the fullest.. I remember my own days of trying and being brazen and bold... luv that last line too.. thankxxx for your terrific comment on my blog ..nice to know u personally to build friendships too.. thankxxx for the compliments on my bio also.. glad I have inspired u to continue on .. and sharing your wonderful writes with us all on this site.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/25/2010 5:44:00 PM
What do you mean MARYjane---I loved this poem..A true masterpiece, I mean mastermind...KEEP IT REAL...ROYAL
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Date: 2/24/2010 4:53:00 PM
Excellent Edward... stated well .. classic masterpiece material.. enjoyed .. luv.. "Sweetheart" I posted a blog on poetry today if u would like to comment .. would appreciate.. thankx...
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Date: 2/22/2010 9:12:00 PM
Yes, a masterpiece my friend. I absolutely love this. Bless you. I see your heart here, and it is magnificent. David
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Date: 2/21/2010 9:02:00 PM
pretty cool poem and experiences for the good here Edward. God bless you and yours. Robert
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:04:00 PM
Awesome, Edward! And you talk about my so called amazing poetry, what's this? Sensational! Yeah, fabulous! Life is quite a road uphill and you are climbing it. Inspiring write, my friend. Thanks for sharing and thank you for "sugar coated" comments on mine. :) Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/21/2010 1:46:00 PM
Wonderful! your descriptions are beautiful!
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:24:00 AM
What a man! Loved all of it yet the last 5 words WOW.
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Date: 2/21/2010 1:24:00 AM
Struggling through and rising above all the drawbacks, and if I am reading it right, passing on the knowledge in the hope of helping others. a great bit of prose. well done. thank you for reading my Separation poem Edward....cheers Margaret
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Date: 2/21/2010 12:22:00 AM
A very interesting poem,with a good message of rejection to failure..and im glad that those around you could appreciate who you were to them...Love the end--'ascension in the azure skies',a beauty. Re your comment,there is my first blog about me,but no my friend I'm not a novelist,I'm just an amateur of poetry,with very limited time to write,yet with so much passion for the pen..Pls tell me the Novel's name if you can,tnks...and reMermaids..I always found tales about mermaids fascinating,tnks.C
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