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Mastered Creation

The fog filters through, tall bare trees Hovering in woods, above ground I listen close to hear a sound Perception is with one who sees A mastered creation right here Scenery, plants and wildlife too Every day brings something sweet, new There's no-where to go, it is near Beauty in the hills, fields and sky The sunsets paint colors to see As the birds sing their songs, carefree The rivers are roaring nearby The strength of the mountains rise high Quiet lakes bring comfort to shore All this waiting outside my door It calls to me and I reply Heidi Sands 12/27/23 8 Syllables (C)opyright

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/28/2023 6:02:00 AM

Beauty of nature--splendid images of sunset--perfectly woven together, Heidi. Much enjoyed the scene you convey.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 6:31:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed this :)

Ink Empress

Date: 12/27/2023 10:36:00 PM

Ah this is so gorgeous and so descriptive. The way you’ve painted imagery throughout is so profound and so creative. I love the sunsets and the opening lines too as well as how you’ve written “ Quiet lakes bring comfort to shore All this waiting outside my door“ theres so much to be grateful for and to appreciate, all around us, nature reminds us to be just that. Sending you light always

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 6:30:00 AM

Thank you very much. I hope you have a nice day :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/27/2023 9:10:00 PM

Nature creates some beautiful tapestries and every day we see a different one.. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 6:29:00 AM

Yes it certainly does. Yes. Thanks Tom :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/27/2023 3:51:00 PM

What a wonderful view outside your door, who could want anything more. A lovely poem Heidi… Belle

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2023 4:00:00 PM

Thank you Belle. I hope you are having a nice evening :)