Heidi Sands Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Mastered Creation

The fog filters through, tall bare trees
Hovering in woods, above ground
I listen close to hear a sound
Perception is with one who sees

A mastered creation right here
Scenery, plants and wildlife too
Every day brings something sweet, new
There's no-where to go, it is near

Beauty in the hills, fields and sky
The sunsets paint colors to see
As the birds sing their songs, carefree
The rivers are roaring nearby

The strength of the mountains rise high
Quiet lakes bring comfort to shore
All this waiting outside my door
It calls to me and I reply

Heidi Sands

12/27/23

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Vijay Pandit December 28, 2023 at 6:02 AM Beauty of nature--splendid images of sunset--perfectly woven together, Heidi. Much enjoyed the scene you convey. Heidi Sands December 28, 2023 at 6:31 AM Thank you Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed this :)

Ink Empress December 27, 2023 at 10:36 PM Ah this is so gorgeous and so descriptive. The way you’ve painted imagery throughout is so profound and so creative. I love the sunsets and the opening lines too as well as how you’ve written “ Quiet lakes bring comfort to shore All this waiting outside my door“ theres so much to be grateful for and to appreciate, all around us, nature reminds us to be just that. Sending you light always Heidi Sands December 28, 2023 at 6:30 AM Thank you very much. I hope you have a nice day :)

Tom Cunningham December 27, 2023 at 9:10 PM Nature creates some beautiful tapestries and every day we see a different one.. Tom Heidi Sands December 28, 2023 at 6:29 AM Yes it certainly does. Yes. Thanks Tom :)

Beryl Edmonds December 27, 2023 at 3:51 PM What a wonderful view outside your door, who could want anything more. A lovely poem Heidi… Belle Heidi Sands December 27, 2023 at 4:00 PM Thank you Belle. I hope you are having a nice evening :)