Mass Cara

Marilyn was cute and charming
Although her eyelashes were quite alarming
They were thick and extremely long
Good job, her eyelids were young and strong
Others found this quite disarming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 6:11 PM
Love, Love, love the title, Shirley. Keep 'em coming!! :) gw
M  Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Good one Shirley….Clever and funny Shirley style! Soupmail!! Debx
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 1:48 AM
lol thanks for the giggle Shirley, i see some eyelashes look like ginormous spiders lol:-) hugs Jan xx LOVED the title by the way - fab word play xx
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June 11, 2023 at 1:46 AM
So would I. Thanks for the laugh, I need it.
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