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Masquerade Ball Macabre

MASQUERADE BALL MACABRE clash of swords and ebony bones, this masquerade ball quickens her pulse. her mask’s sutured to her face. panic embraces her opaque eyes. silver flashes, like lightening bolts, to win her hand. spectres did hypnotize her, thus paralyzed and abandoned to this land of obscurity. she reaches out to plead, in a grave moment of despair. her white gown gutted, spills crimson from her limb. Esmeralda remains aloof for the juncture of the clash. head throbs from the sound of shrieking bones. likewise, the wound pounds, as her heart sinks further south, into oblivion, building a veneer of defiance towards eventual death. pitch black horror and melting wax of a ghostly moon devours, what’s left of her innocence. Her silent screams grow ever stronger. the clash of swords and ebony bones have gone quiet. 5/28/2017
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Date: 6/6/2017 9:16:00 PM
wowsers Kim! Gave me chills over and over and over again :) You outdid yourself again and you should know how gifted that pen of yours really is. It's a rare thing! Be blessed...thank you and congrats ;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2017 9:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Laura! XO
Date: 5/28/2017 8:08:00 PM
This is really Goth. I like it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thanks, Dale!
Date: 5/28/2017 6:48:00 PM
Wow, this poem is so dramatic, filled with incredible dark imagery and magnificence, Kim! Should do very well on n the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 5/28/2017 2:11:00 PM
- So great you have woven the words into this "creepy" poem, Kim - Very well done :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2017 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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