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Masquerade

M aking believe that you're doing just fine, A llowing only your best deeds to shine. S aying what everyone wants to hear, Q uickly quashing any sign of fear. U gly emotions swiftly tamped down, E nergy exerted in preventing a frown. R eality is you are quite a mess, A nxiety fills you, makes you feel "less". D on't give in to that lie, it is not true. E liminate your masks and be the real you. 4/13/21 For Brian Strand's August Poetry contest

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Date: 8/2/2021 2:45:00 AM
A great message is given. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/6/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 4/17/2021 5:09:00 PM
Wow! Awesome acrostic and message Kim! When I saw the title I started hearing the song from ‘Phantom of the Opera’ !! Lol! But reading it...hits home. How true we wear masks and allow others only to see what we want them to see many times! You have included more, depth, and hope!! Big huggs and love my dear friend!! Deb
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, Deborah!
Date: 4/15/2021 2:16:00 AM
Yes. I agree. Nice one ...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 4/14/2021 12:25:00 PM
this is wonderful, kim! it's challenging to make an acrostic rhyme and you've done so masterfully here...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene!
Date: 4/14/2021 11:37:00 AM
Enjoyed! Aloha! Rico
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Rico!
Date: 4/14/2021 7:45:00 AM
Insightful and witty Acrostic, dearest, Kim! Blessings.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 4/13/2021 5:48:00 PM
The true you shines brighter. Nicely done.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Marilene!
Date: 4/13/2021 4:57:00 PM
We all have our masks (literally these days!) very descriptive of shedding those to let your true light shine :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 4/13/2021 2:53:00 PM
Yes, it is important to be the real you. Great one Kim :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!

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