Masquerade

M aking believe that you're doing just fine,
A llowing only your best deeds to shine.
S aying what everyone wants to hear,
Q uickly quashing any sign of fear.
U gly emotions swiftly tamped down,                                                                     
E nergy exerted in preventing a frown.
R eality is you are quite a mess,
A nxiety fills you, makes you feel "less".
D on't give in to that lie, it is not true.
E liminate your masks and be the  real you.


4/13/21
For Brian Strand's August Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 2:45 AM
A great message is given. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
Merryman Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Burch Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Wow! Awesome acrostic and message Kim! When I saw the title I started hearing the song from ‘Phantom of the Opera’ !! Lol! But reading it...hits home. How true we wear masks and allow others only to see what we want them to see many times! You have included more, depth, and hope!! Big huggs and love my dear friend!! Deb
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April 25, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, Deborah!
Neumann Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 2:16 AM
Yes. I agree. Nice one ...
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April 25, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, Kai!
Bauer Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 12:25 PM
this is wonderful, kim! it's challenging to make an acrostic rhyme and you've done so masterfully here...
Merryman Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Thank you, Ilene!
Leffanta Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Enjoyed! Aloha! Rico
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April 25, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Thank you, Rico!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Insightful and witty Acrostic, dearest, Kim! Blessings.
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April 25, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Evans Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 5:48 PM
The true you shines brighter. Nicely done.
Merryman Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Thank you, Marilene!
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:57 PM
We all have our masks (literally these days!) very descriptive of shedding those to let your true light shine :)
Merryman Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Sands Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Yes, it is important to be the real you. Great one Kim :)
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April 25, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
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