Masked Heart

The cries of a silent heart In the face of pain Pumps dry tears Whispers of a broken heart Inconspicuously smile Shattered words Lay

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Michael Smith

Date: 3/23/2012 3:23:00 PM

I've been reading a few of your poems and enjoy them immensely. I long for more as each piece seems too short.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/11/2012 8:43:00 PM

Thank you, Walayee, for your kind comments today and for the placement in your contest. I'm happy to see you return to the soup and hope you are well. No need for apologies. I did not think you were being irresponsible about judging. I know you haven't been posting either so I was concerned about your absence. I look forward to reading more of your poetry and welcome back. Blessings, Rhonda

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/11/2012 8:21:00 PM

loaded painful and effective, Lay. Grabs me. Thanks for you rgreat comment. I certainly hope all is going well for you and yours

Sarah Jabri

Date: 3/11/2012 3:33:00 PM

very emotional--wonderful <3