Ma's Soup

'Dinner won't be long, Dear.'

Burt puffed up his pillows and squeezed one out.

'Better wash your hands, now'.

The armchair smothered his glee.

Wallaby faggots, 

Brown rice juices,

Lentils,

Barley and rye.



Jumbo  morels,

Whatever she sells,

Liquid fish stock,

Brussels and hock,

Tranches of offal from Thebes!



Chilly jam and

Fruity brown sauce.



Round and round

The rotten rump,

The rancid ratchet rasped.

'It must've been that onion jus',

Was all that I could gasp.



Round and round

The rotten rump,

The rancid ratchet rasped.

'It must've been that onion jus',

Was all that I could gasp.

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Date: 12/1/2023 12:54:00 PM
Sounds great Chedia.. Welcome to poetry soup. I look forward to reading more of your poems and I hope you enjoy your time on here..
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Date: 12/1/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/29/2023 3:00:00 PM
Neat. Reads like a nursery rhyme
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Date: 11/30/2023 1:21:00 PM
That's very nice of you to say so. :D Thank you. I was trying for the homely feel when serving homemade Australian cuisine... I was a little concerned it may come across as just a bag of hot wind - so glad it pleased.
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