Marvelling in the Pink afternoon

Marvelling in the pink afternoon, pretending
to crochet a drawstring. I’ve done it before,
at least once before, followed the pattern. Closed
the purse. I can’t nearly begin
to learn that not all things are meant
to bring pleasure to me…they are oft’ meant
to gift, to love, to let go
of. Don’t
pull too hard…enclose a piece of your heart
on a little toy ship…let the paper sailboat
head toward the pond-swan. Even
mom’s precious teacups sunk
to the glass bottom, broke
in pieces. Her words stay,
meaningful & meaningless.
She meant us siblings to cheek-kiss.
Dad’s eyes see through the glass bottom -
either smiling bright or sad if we fight,
so we mustn’t fight. Marvelling
in the pink afternoon, pretending
to pour tea. Laying linen
on familial laps. Kind cubes
of sugar, kerplunk, splash
about with leafy-hugs. the drawstring closes
over promising memories. Marvelling
in the pink afternoon, letting go of…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Introspective, can be taken in some many ways, nostalgic and I really appreciate the talent here, and voice <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 7:06 PM
Thank you so much! Poetry is cathartic. Bless you, Paige ~ Kim
One Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Hey Kim, I felt your poem is a poignant meditation on the cyclical nature of life, where moments of marvel and connection are intertwined with moments of loss and release. It encourages readers to cherish the beauty of each passing moment while embracing the inevitability of change and growth.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 6:15 PM
Thank you so much! Your comment shows understanding. I appreciate you, Silent!
Empress Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 5:54 AM
Such a deep and heartfelt poem, i love how you mentioned mom and dad and how this was written in a very introspective manner , with a hint of nostalgia. Brilliant, pleasure reading you dear kim, hope you are doing well. Sending you light always
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 6:37 AM
Thank you, Ink Empress. Don’t we get all introspective as we grow older?! Blessings ~ Kim
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