Marty Crashes Luellas Party
six little girls made it to Luella’s faerie tea party
the food was dainty, crispy, sugary, nothing hearty
they ate their cookies and laughed about her brother Marty
who was making silly faces, a nine-year-old boy, a smarty
Luella complained to her mother, he was ruining her party.
Her mother made him leave, her adorable brother, Marty.
some girls were not having as much fun, their laughs not as hearty.
not having older brothers, they had been delighted by Marty.
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