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Martial Haiku

Iron warrior pulled by fear and panic moons turning blood to rust. May 11, 2016 Mars Contest

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Date: 5/23/2016 5:31:00 AM
Well-written and imaginative haiku. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:35:00 AM
Rita A, congrats on your "Life On Mars" Win...LINDA
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:06:00 AM
Very short, but extremely powerful, Rita. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:55:00 AM
Wow!!! What an awesome KU!!!!
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Date: 5/12/2016 4:36:00 AM
Rita, congrats on your wonderful placement in Brian Davey's Life On Mars contest!
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Date: 5/12/2016 2:40:00 AM
Powerful Haiku that has a profound effect on one who reads it! Congrats on making my winners list for this contest!
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Date: 5/11/2016 6:43:00 PM
Love it!
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Date: 5/11/2016 4:26:00 PM
Wonderful 3 lines Rita.
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Date: 5/11/2016 2:13:00 PM
- Great written Haiku, Rita - hugs // Sun :)
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 5/11/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thank you!

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