Martial Haiku

Iron warrior pulled by fear and panic moons turning blood to rust. May 11, 2016 Mars Contest

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Robert Pettit

Date: 5/23/2016 5:31:00 AM

Well-written and imaginative haiku. Congratulations on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2016 2:35:00 AM

Rita A, congrats on your "Life On Mars" Win...LINDA

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/12/2016 10:06:00 AM

Very short, but extremely powerful, Rita. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2016 8:55:00 AM

Wow!!! What an awesome KU!!!!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 5/12/2016 4:36:00 AM

Rita, congrats on your wonderful placement in Brian Davey's Life On Mars contest!

Brian Davey

Date: 5/12/2016 2:40:00 AM

Powerful Haiku that has a profound effect on one who reads it! Congrats on making my winners list for this contest!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/11/2016 6:43:00 PM

Love it!

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/11/2016 4:26:00 PM

Wonderful 3 lines Rita.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2016 2:13:00 PM

- Great written Haiku, Rita - hugs // Sun :)

Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 5/11/2016 2:21:00 PM

Thank you!