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Rita A. Simmonds

Martial Haiku

Iron warrior
pulled by fear and panic moons
turning blood to rust.

May 11, 2016
Mars Contest

Copyright © Rita A. Simmonds | Year Posted 2016

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May 23, 2016 at 5:31 AM

Well-written and imaginative haiku. Congratulations on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

May 13, 2016 at 2:35 AM

Rita A, congrats on your "Life On Mars" Win...LINDA

May 12, 2016 at 10:06 AM

Very short, but extremely powerful, Rita. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

May 12, 2016 at 8:55 AM

Wow!!! What an awesome KU!!!!

May 12, 2016 at 4:36 AM

Rita, congrats on your wonderful placement in Brian Davey's Life On Mars contest!

May 12, 2016 at 2:40 AM

Powerful Haiku that has a profound effect on one who reads it! Congrats on making my winners list for this contest!

May 11, 2016 at 6:43 PM

Love it!

Lenny Gazbowski

May 11, 2016 at 4:26 PM

Wonderful 3 lines Rita.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2016 at 2:13 PM

- Great written Haiku, Rita - hugs // Sun :)

Rita A. Simmonds

May 11, 2016 at 2:21 PM

Thank you!

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