Martial Arts Ballet

master the sense of balance
spin and rotate
master weightlessness
on the head of a pin


stan sand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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February 9, 2019 at 7:05 AM
I like this one. I think you can grow this.
Blown Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 9:30 AM
thanks noel...i've always had a weakness for kung fu movies
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February 8, 2019 at 7:25 PM
very interesting!!So you have experienced weightlessness. I saw it shown The other night on that fun comedy show Big Bang Theory.
Blown Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 8:45 PM
a 'weightlessness' is not as one might think weightless is ...it is more just an experience of the 'abnormal'
Gauthier Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Wow - your word ballet elevates your awesome bite of a poem to the next level. Bravo!
Blown Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 8:48 PM
ballet and tai chi for example have much in common
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February 8, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Oh nice ink!
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February 8, 2019 at 3:09 PM
mmmmmm :)
Blown Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 1:46 PM
the first time one discovers 'weightlessness' it's a mind blower
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