Martial Arts Ballet

master the sense of balance spin and rotate master weightlessness on the head of a pin stan sand

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Date: 2/9/2019 7:05:00 AM

I like this one. I think you can grow this.

Sand Blown
Date: 2/9/2019 9:30:00 AM

thanks noel...i've always had a weakness for kung fu movies

Date: 2/8/2019 7:25:00 PM

very interesting!!So you have experienced weightlessness. I saw it shown The other night on that fun comedy show Big Bang Theory.

Sand Blown
Date: 2/8/2019 8:45:00 PM

a 'weightlessness' is not as one might think weightless is ...it is more just an experience of the 'abnormal'

Date: 2/8/2019 2:53:00 PM

Wow - your word ballet elevates your awesome bite of a poem to the next level. Bravo!

Sand Blown
Date: 2/8/2019 8:48:00 PM

ballet and tai chi for example have much in common

Date: 2/8/2019 12:18:00 PM

Oh nice ink!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/8/2019 3:09:00 PM

mmmmmm :)

Sand Blown
Date: 2/8/2019 1:46:00 PM

the first time one discovers 'weightlessness' it's a mind blower